WVUforREDSKINS Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 I'm not one for lying on my resume and never have, but now that I am in Sydney (which is more expensive that Manhattan) I need to do something to try and get that interview. Otherwise i will find myself out of this place pretty fast. This city is awesome, but it is soooo incredibly expensive. Many people expand the truth in their resume and I am asking for advice on some good things to put down. I'm not gonna say I went to law school or anything like that, but what are some things that would help my resume stand out? The catch is that I have to get a temp job and I am only here for a year and, for some reason, only permitted to work for the same employer for up to a year. So im basically looking at temp/contract work. I sent my resume out to a few temp agencies on thursday. I hope I hear from at least one of them soon. I suppose I should post my resume. This is revised to fit Aussie format. They don't care as much about education as experience. Job Experience Romano’s Macaroni Grill, Alexandria, VA (2009) Server: Served food and beverages and up sold wine Cleared, cleaned and reset tables Provided excellent customer service in large popular restaurant Handled cash and credit transactions The Center for Responsive Politics, Washington DC (2009) Researcher: 6 month internship for nonprofit nonpartisan organization dedicated to tracking political contributions and their effect on elections and public policy Researched Political Action Committees Entered and maintained contribution data The International Union of Operating Engineers, Washington, DC (2008)Office Assistant responsible for data entry: Responsible for updating the database system and keeping records of membership dues Learned a new computer program (Telnet) for tracking membership information Acted as liaison to local unions on dues-related questions Giant Foods, Burke, VA (2007) Cashier: Responsible for cash and credit transactions Provided efficient and friendly service to customers Congressman José Serrano (NY), Washington DC (2006) Intern: Reviewed and summarized appropriations requests Answered phonesand dealt with constituents on a daily basis Attended appropriations hearings to take notes and report back to the Congressman’s Chief of Staff organised and transferred congressional speeches and interviews from video to DVD NV Pools, Springfield and Burke, VA (1999-2002): Lifeguard: Responsible for safety of club members and guests Sold refreshments and handled cash transactions Taught swim classes to six and seven-year-old children Volunteer Work Appalachian Prison Book Project, Morgantown, WV (2007): Volunteered for a nonprofit organization Handled correspondence from people incarcerated in state prisons requesting books Responsible for acquiring books and sending them to inmates Education West Virginia University, Bachelor of Arts degree in Political Science with a minor in Communications, and Sociology. August 2007. (THIS ISN'T TRUE I DON'T HAVE A MINOR so that's one little lie, i did take several classes in both subjects) Computer Skills Extended experience in Word, Excel, Power Point, Microsoft Access, Internet Quorum, The Gimp, Photoshop, and Telnet. Willing and able to learn new programs. Additional Information Member, Sigma Chi Fraternity. Interests include the Middle East, international relations, reading, chess, poker, snowboarding, water/snow skiing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robotfire Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 Your family is awesome. You look beautiful in that dress. I really enjoy chick flicks. If you discover during the interview that you don't want the job, tell them you are gay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WVUforREDSKINS Posted October 24, 2009 Author Share Posted October 24, 2009 If you discover during the interview that you don't want the job, tell them you are gay. Normally, I would just point to the picture on his desk and ask "who's that ugly *****?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mickalino Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 If the name-plate on the desk of the interviewer says "Dumas", say, "Nice to meet you, Mr, Dumbass" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SnyderShrugged Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 I wouldnt lie, on anything. Now, embellish, thats another story. Are there possibly accomplishments that you could add? "won xyz award for outstanding customer service" "became the first intern to do xyz" etc. Maybe cite involvement on committees, and the committee accomplishments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
renaissance Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 Focus less on responsibilities and more on outputs and achievements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mickalino Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 Focus less on responsibilities and more on outputs and achievements. But then his resume would be a blank page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johns Bass Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 Do not lie, that will kill you. Get letters of recommendation from past employers and Department Heads from your school. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissU28 Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 you worked for NV pools? Did you know Eric Whitestone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
renaissance Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 Congressman José Serrano (NY), Washington DC (2006)Intern: Reviewed and summarized appropriations requests Answered phonesand dealt with constituents on a daily basis Attended appropriations hearings to take notes and report back to the Congressman’s Chief of Staff organised and transferred congressional speeches and interviews from video to DVD Why did you review and summarize appropriations request? You never deal with constituents, you assist them. And you don't answer phones, you respond to inquiries and resolve issues. Don't start a line with attended, it's not a very good action verb and it honestly doesn't have much impact. And maybe you compiled congressional speech videos and transferred them to dvd. NV Pools, Springfield and Burke, VA (1999-2002):Lifeguard: Responsible for safety of club members and guests Sold refreshments and handled cash transactions Taught swim classes to six and seven-year-old children I would put the taught swim classes first, and would say how many kids were in each class. If you taught classes of 5-10 kids, thats a lot to handle. You weren't responsible for guest safety - I'm hoping you ensured their safety And you sold refreshments, but maybe you actually managed the refreshments stand? Just a start, but I think the little things make a difference. Don't just say what you did, say why you did it and how you did it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrockster21 Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 Assistant regional manager instead of assistant TO the regional manager. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WVUforREDSKINS Posted October 24, 2009 Author Share Posted October 24, 2009 Cool, thanks. And yes, I have several letters of recommendation one from the Congressman and the other from the Center for Responsive Politics. But im not gonna be doing anything in Politics while im hear, but it is a glowing letter of recommendation. By the way, went jetboating friday....had no idea how wet you get. I was soaked, but it was fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
renaissance Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 By the way, went jetboating friday....had no idea how wet you get. I was soaked, but it was fun. I went when it was like 40 degrees out. Windy + water = not the ideal circumstances :doh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abdcskins Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 President of Lesotho. No problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
youngestson Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 Do not lie, that will kill you. Get letters of recommendation from past employers and Department Heads from your school. I second that. It's better in the long run (and short run) to be eloquent and concise on the resume then make stuff up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoggLife Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 I would put the taught swim classes first, and would say how many kids were in each class. If you taught classes of 5-10 kids, thats a lot to handle. You weren't responsible for guest safety - I'm hoping you ensured their safety And you sold refreshments, but maybe you actually managed the refreshments stand? Just a start, but I think the little things make a difference. Don't just say what you did, say why you did it and how you did it. Ya but if anyone drowd under your watch I definately wouldnt put that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mickalino Posted October 24, 2009 Share Posted October 24, 2009 Ya but if anyone drowd under your watch I definately wouldnt put that. But that would be lying by omission Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abdcskins Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 I am approaching 6 months of unemployment, I think I am going to start lying on my resume. And I mean like making up previous employment. I don't even care....anything to get an interview. If they find out I was lying then fine. Obviously my resume is not impressive enough because I have applied to probably 50 jobs the past 6 months with zero responses. Desperate times require desperate measures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockeysc23 Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 I am approaching 6 months of unemployment, I think I am going to start lying on my resume. And I mean like making up previous employment. I don't even care....anything to get an interview. If they find out I was lying then fine. Obviously my resume is not impressive enough because I have applied to probably 50 jobs the past 6 months with zero responses. Desperate times require desperate measures. Wow that couldn't be farther than from what you should do. Only 50 jobs? When I graduated I sent out at least 10 resumes a day to different companies. Get the book what color is your parachute. Don't lie, work harder to get that job. As to the OP. I also second don't lie. Just keep beating on doors to get your resume out there. I would definitely get rid of the interests section. I don't know any employeer that would care that you like poker. It has a negative connotation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McD5 Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 Is "interested in the middle east" really necessary? It doesn't gain you any points, and from what I have heard about Australia, it could lose you points. What would be the point of having that on there? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McD5 Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 Desperate times require desperate measures. Walk in and get the job. Don't mail resumes, like the other 99 people in that large pile on someone's desk. Stand out, show them you are serious, walk in, deliver the resume to the decision maker and ask for the job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corcaigh Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 I am approaching 6 months of unemployment, I think I am going to start lying on my resume. And I mean like making up previous employment. I don't even care....anything to get an interview. If they find out I was lying then fine. Obviously my resume is not impressive enough because I have applied to probably 50 jobs the past 6 months with zero responses. My little company that no-one will have heard of is hiring for several entry level positions and for each one got over 200 applicants. In that kind of market it's hard to stand out. If you haven't already, I would try to work your network of former colleagues, family, friends etc for an in and to help you stand out. Do what you can get face time with the employers. And tailor your resume and cover letter to respond to the position you are applying for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abdcskins Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 My little company that no-one will have heard of is hiring for several entry level positions and for each one got over 200 applicants. In that kind of market it's hard to stand out.If you haven't already, I would try to work your network of former colleagues, family, friends etc for an in and to help you stand out. Do what you can get face time with the employers. And tailor your resume and cover letter to respond to the position you are applying for. For sure, thanks. I have been talking to friends of my father in informal interviews, one a bigtime CEO for Sempra Energy. Hopefully that might result in something. At the least I get some good advice. And yeah I definitley alter my cover letter depending on where I apply. In every meeting the issue of going back to school for a master's degree has come up. That might be an inevitable task if I want to get a good job. Good advice on going straight to the company, McD5. I am doing that tomorrow. hockey, 50 was just an estimate, it is probably more. I have lost count. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheDoyler23 Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 Walk in and get the job.Don't mail resumes, like the other 99 people in that large pile on someone's desk. Stand out, show them you are serious, walk in, deliver the resume to the decision maker and ask for the job. We have a winner. Directly marketing yourself and your skills to companies will get you hired. Submitting resumes and hiding in the internet will not. Is it awkward and uncomfortable to just walk into an employer? Certainly. Is it effective? YES. Submit a resume (AND COVER LETTER!) in person and try and talk to a hiring manager or person in HR. If you can't talk to them at that time, ask when you should come back or follow up over the phone. If you do talk to them face to face or in depth over the phone, send a quick thank you note for getting some of their time. I went directly out of town just after my second interview at my current employer, so my thank you note was actually a postcard from my trip. It set me apart from the other finalist. (I help people find employment for a living, btw. You'd be amazed how much basic social skills and a little determination will get you) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mickalino Posted January 26, 2010 Share Posted January 26, 2010 (I help people find employment for a living, btw. Can you help me and abdcskins ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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