Triple C Posted April 1, 2008 Share Posted April 1, 2008 This is my Sean Tyalor Freestyle rap. I posted another one but it was bad quality. This is amazing. Please comment R.I.P http://youtube.com/watch?v=6PQquXFxKas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRobi21 Posted April 1, 2008 Share Posted April 1, 2008 Pretty sick man. Thanks for the repost. I can hear all the lyrics in this one. Nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiveStrongSkins Posted April 1, 2008 Share Posted April 1, 2008 As I said before... you are talented enough to not have to rap about the gloom and doom of St's life. The harder challenge for you is to make something his daughter and wife someday would want to hear. You are very talented at what you do but I dont really want to hear how St got "popped" throughout a song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuadsaif123 Posted April 1, 2008 Share Posted April 1, 2008 nice lyrics yo. u can tell he spoke form the heart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeoDC Posted April 1, 2008 Share Posted April 1, 2008 Good rap, I think u should rapped a little slower though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mackdaddydean Posted April 1, 2008 Share Posted April 1, 2008 Ever heard of rhythm? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Pimp Posted April 2, 2008 Share Posted April 2, 2008 Feeling the lyrics!!!!!!!!!! I needed that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sean_e_b Posted April 2, 2008 Share Posted April 2, 2008 Not a fan of rap music so I may not be the best judge. In my opinion there is very little rythm and poor lyrics. It also sounds like you recorded it when you had a stuffy nose or something. A nice gesture, but not anything close to being any good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mackdaddydean Posted April 2, 2008 Share Posted April 2, 2008 Not a fan of rap music so I may not be the best judge. In my opinion there is very little rythm and poor lyrics. It also sounds like you recorded it when you had a stuffy nose or something. A nice gesture, but not anything close to being any good. Yeah it just sounds like your just talking over a beat in the background but not actually TO the beat. If you could put it to a beat thatd be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Santana_Fan Posted April 2, 2008 Share Posted April 2, 2008 Not a fan of rap music so I may not be the best judge. In my opinion there is very little rythm and poor lyrics. It also sounds like you recorded it when you had a stuffy nose or something. A nice gesture, but not anything close to being any good. Wow. To the OP, great lyrics, only 16 and better than adult lyricists. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CounterTrey75 Posted April 2, 2008 Share Posted April 2, 2008 I'm sure it took you a long time to write. Nice gesture. I appreciate the tribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeepThaFaithDC Posted April 2, 2008 Share Posted April 2, 2008 fellas. y don't yall come up with a song or a rap then. this guy cared about that man so much that he did this on his own. i dig it. props to ya man. taylor was def a legend. and i don't think that this rap song was for your comments fellas as much as it was for the man, sean taylor. like i said come out with your song n let us bash you. but neways, props to ya brotha. he wouldve appreciated that and it makes me miss him. everytime i c the redskins or play madden i think of sean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DA SKINS! Posted April 2, 2008 Share Posted April 2, 2008 Some of these comments are uncalled for, but then again not everyone thinks before they talk (in this case, type) keep doing what you do, very talented and thanks for taking the time to make this song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skinzftball1756 Posted April 2, 2008 Share Posted April 2, 2008 pretty good pretty good.. i only have one suggestion... if i was you i think i would be lookin forward to playin two hand tag wit ST one day hahaha id avoid the tacklin if i was you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jahbird Posted April 2, 2008 Share Posted April 2, 2008 If this actually was a freestyle I would say all right, not bad. However, it was obviously written. The reason he sounds to fast for the beat at times, and to slow at others is because he lacks breath control. His flow speeds up as he runs out of breath, but when he catches it his rhyme sloowwss down. Plus, the quality was bunk. He made a hot beat sound like garbage, which drives real heads insane. However, all that stuff is easily fixed with practice and there was some quality to his rhyme. With a correctly leveled track and some breath control this kid could sound hot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adamyesme1111 Posted April 2, 2008 Share Posted April 2, 2008 It's a Sean Taylor rap, not a freestyle rap. It would be a freestyle if it was about random stuff, or if it was off the top of your head and its neither. its still cool though =) I have the same instrumental from sound click.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SlinginSammy HOF '63 Posted April 2, 2008 Share Posted April 2, 2008 Ever heard of rhythm? Rhythm to a Canadian is like orange juice to toothpaste. :laugh: j/k good work. Keep pouring your heart into it, but remember to continue pouring your energy into your education. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigDFan5 Posted April 2, 2008 Share Posted April 2, 2008 Damn I thought someone was gona get rickrolled Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SlinginSammy HOF '63 Posted April 2, 2008 Share Posted April 2, 2008 The thread title is quite modest Is it better than the one on ST's Myspace page? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Triple C Posted April 3, 2008 Author Share Posted April 3, 2008 Alright thanks for the comments guys. And yes this is a freestyle. I posted a freetsyle about 2 days after sean died but some ppl couldnt work the link. so i just memorised my freestyle and spat it again and put it on youtube. For all those people who say its garbage thats great. Your opinion will be taken into thought whne you produce a better sean taylor rap. And for the people who give CONSTRUCTIVE criticism thanks a lot. I know Im talented I perform at clubs at my school you name it. However I dont have the best quality material (mic, sound editing program) And as for rhythm it wasnt written for the beat. It was a freestyle on another beat on a website. But keep the comments comin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PCS Posted April 3, 2008 Share Posted April 3, 2008 Actually, I like what the rap was saying. It's the words more than music for me on this one. Though I would be curious to hear what C could do with these lyrics in something other than freestyle. Took some time to write it and compose it I'm sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Triple C Posted April 3, 2008 Author Share Posted April 3, 2008 ^thanks someone understands hip hop is not about crazy voice effects and **** tis a message. If you want me to do another rap about the redskins i will gimiie a topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SKINS FAN #56 Posted April 3, 2008 Share Posted April 3, 2008 Major props man that's pretty tight. Keep it up :applause: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleeding Burgundy Posted April 3, 2008 Share Posted April 3, 2008 I can tell you put a lot of effort into it, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRobi21 Posted April 3, 2008 Share Posted April 3, 2008 ^thanks someone understands hip hop is not about crazy voice effects and **** tis a message. If you want me to do another rap about the redskins i will gimiie a topic Seriously. Did someone actually say it wasn't a freestyle cause it was about Sean?? :laugh: Jesus. :doh: Props man. Umm. Don't have any ideas yet about a new one, but if I come up with one I'll post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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